Throughout this class I became more confident in my abilities because I no longer felt that my fears and doubts in myself were a problem. My classmates all shared the fears and doubts as I did. We learned that we all have our shortcomings and that is fine.
The three presentations I did throughout the quarter were also enlightening to me. Each presentation I attempted a different style: powerpoint presentation, spoken, and spoken+whiteboard. Teachers who can lecture without any visual support have a skill that I do not. I felt that powerpoint left to little for me to express as the presentation should state it with fewer words. Using the whiteboard as a visual representation felt more comfortable to me. My colleagues had to follow what I said while also being able to see the most important ideas behind me.
I learned more about how I want to teach and the vast array of teaching styles. I hope to be able to use some of the ideas that I learned in my readings and my classmates presentations someday to experiment further with what works for my teaching style to improve my teaching in the future.
English Teacher in Training
Friday, March 20, 2020
Sunday, March 15, 2020
Content Area Portfolio Project
I)
Speaking/Listening
A)
8th Grade Debate
1)
Debate requires incredible listening skills to
take notes and comprehend the entirety of a person’s argument while also noting
potential weaknesses in said argument. During this time, the lessons emphasized
notetaking and analyzing what a persona is saying. Becoming aware of what a
person is saying and analyzing their facts has allowed me to better understand
what a person is meaning and questioning the accuracy of their statement.
2) Artifact
Affirmative
Constructive
INTRO: “Developing alternative renewable
energy resources have benefits that go beyond
environmental health; they improve personal health, enhance national security
and encourage our nation's economic viability.” This quote From Jim Clyburn is
representative of the genuine nature of our resolution. The United States has
realized the importance of establishing reliable energy resources other than
those currently used. I stand resolved: The development of Energy Resources in
the United States takes precedence over the protection of the environment.
Obs.
1: Definitions
Development: to make available for use
Precedence: the right to precede in rank or
importance; priority
Protection: to shield from injury of
destruction.
Environment: external factors
surrounding and affecting an organism at any time.
Obs. 2: America has become dependent on the production of energy resources to the point where the cease of it’s development would cripple the nation, therefore the affirmative value is preservation, because in order to preserve the nation, we must develop energy resources.
Obs. 2: America has become dependent on the production of energy resources to the point where the cease of it’s development would cripple the nation, therefore the affirmative value is preservation, because in order to preserve the nation, we must develop energy resources.
Obs.
3: I ask the judge to weigh the round using Futurism. The consequence of an
action will benefit future generations.
Cont. 1The U.S. does not need to relive past
crisis caused by our lack of adeptivity. According to “The 1973 Oil Crisis” by
Sarah Horton in 1973, when middle-eastern OPEC nations stopped exporting oil
and other goods to the U.S. and other countries, gas prices quadrupled, and the
United was forced face many major issues because there were very little
alternatives to using oil, most of which originally came from those OPEC
nations. If new energy resources were developed, and the U.S. became more
independent, then when fossils fuels run out, there will be fewer crises than
the 1973 example.
Cont. 2: The economy has almost always been
shown to depend on energy development. For example Hydraulic Fracturing has
created many jobs for people who previously didn’t have a job, but directly
mining the natural is only one of the jobs it supports. People depend on
natural gas because it is clean and has low carbon content. According to the
American Petroleum Institute natural gas “is critical to American manufacturing
jobs, to farmers for fertilizer, to households for heating and cooking, to
businesses for electricity and fuel for transportation needs, and to society…”
This is only the beginning of the economic impacts that energy resource development
has, and they are all positive.
Cont. 3: The development of energy
resources would be a huge benefit to future generations. By obtaining Energy
Resources that will last longer than the current ones, the economy will be more
stable and independent. The United States would no longer be crippled when
oil-rich nations decide to cut off exports with us, and so the U.S. would be
stronger. A considerable amount of the nation’s debt attributes to oil, so
without the need to buy it, the debt would decrease from its current position
at 15 trillion. I urge you to vote for the affirmative.
Cont. 4: If we increase our knowledge of
energy resources, then the nation will be able to fix problems in the
environment. We can reach our opponent’s goal (to protect the environment) by
expanding on our goal- developing energy resources. Manufacturers are already
taking steps to insure that citizens can take control of which energy resources
they use. Some are marketing new environment friendly products that have carbon
labeling. They show the carbon footprint of each product. Researchers have
confirmed that this action will have a meaningful effect on carbon emissions.
· Hydraulic
fracturing is a technology used in the United States to help produce more than
7 billion barrels of oil and 600 trillion cubic feet of natural gas. 80% of
natural gas wells will require Fracking.
· Organization
for the Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC)
· Cont.
2 comes from API American petroleum institute.
· Cont.
3 comes from cei.org (competitive enterprise institute)
· Cont.
4 comes from rff.org (resources for the future)
B)
My Family’s Way of Communicating
1) My husband while being introduced to my family,
as an outsider, was able to inform me about how my family communicates. My
family speaks through interrupting each other to have our say in subjects as we
are very bad at letting people have their turn speaking. The act of being made
aware of my way of communicating with one group of people can help me be aware
of my speaking and interaction with others as it can appear rude or insensitive
to others.
C)
D&D Playing, especially DMing
1)
As an active player of Dungeons & Dragons, I
am aware of importance of listening. The game is based around the idea of
listening to the instructions the facilitator/narrator of the game. A player
needs to be aware and listen to what the other players are doing. Listening and
observing details that can be taken advantage of in the situation the game
portrays. As the facilitator/narrator, there is a necessity to listen to everything
the players say since you a responsible for responding to whatever the player
says. Anything the facilitator/narrator is important to the players, who are
also listening intently, as a tool to potentially use in the future. The game
is all about communication, primarily listening to what others say to create a
communal narrative.
II)
Visual Literacy/Visually Representing
A)
Create Visual Representation of Fahrenheit
451 and Julius Caesar in 10th Grade
1)
In 10th grade, my teacher valued the
use of visually representing ideas. The two assignments that I remember best
where we drew a visual representation of the character Clarisse who seemed
otherworldly or angelic in nature. I remember some students drew simple
pictures of a girl in a dress, others drew ghosts, someone drew an angel. I
remember reading the novel and seeing myself as Clarisse. When I drew her, I
created a self-portrait in a white dress. There was not a requirement to be
good at art, but to think about the descriptions of a character, both physically
and symbolically. The teacher further developed this when she asked us to draw
the death of Julius Caesar in William Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar. Most
created the scene as the play describes it. I remember creating a picture of a
sculpture with dozens of holes, blood spewing out like a fountain; a proud,
kingly man now lived in a river of his own blood. These assignments encouraged
me to think more abstractly about descriptions rather than looking only at a
literal image and interpretation.
B)
Site Reading Sheet Music
1)
Reading sheet music requires the ability to look
at images an understand their meaning. One needs to look for small details to
determine what notes to play and how to play it. Learning to read sheet music
has taught me to notice small details in the pieces I’m looking at with only
short glances while still gaining information from many minute details.
C)
Teaching Sunday School
1)
I teach primarily children between three to five
years old, although I do occasionally teach up to twelve-year-old children. Creating
visual representations of stories is crucial to making successful lessons for these
children. Learning to create effective visual tools and aids took years of
trial and error. Without the visual aids, the kids rarely understood the lessons.
By learning to examine other visual aids to improve my own, I’ve grown to further
appreciate the use and creation of visual aids.
III)
Writing/Composition/Grammar
A)
Angel Wars and 50 Poems Over a Summer
1)
I wrote my first story in first grade. It wasn’t
much, but it began my desire to make stories. In fifth grade, I began writing a
story that was over a hundred pages long which I didn’t finish until sixth
grade. I still have the story, poorly written with plenty of flaws. The act of
writing the story, which began as a handwritten task, improved my knowledge of
writing. Although none of my further writing projects were so large, my quality
of writing has improved. I just kept practicing. My greatest writing
accomplishment occurred last summer when I wrote fifty poems of varying style. The
quality of my writing has increased because of this practice and continual work.
B)
Learning French in High School
1)
I had never thought much of the structure of the
English language until I began studying French in high school. We just speak English
without thinking, but my teacher constantly referred to the structure of French
to English. Comparing and contrasting sentence structures of different
languages has made me more aware of grammatical structure of a piece.
C)
Reading and Editing my Father’s Story
1)
My father created a story, and I’ve been his primary
editor. I’ve examined his story and have discussed revisions and story
development with him. By examining the construction of someone else’s story in
depth while also having access to the author who can explain what they are attempting
to express, I have better learned the construction of a story and even how to express
the desired ideas.
IV)
Literature/Reading
A)
Reading to my mom and Reading A Prayer for
Owen Meany with my mom
1)
In my later elementary school days and
throughout middle school, I would regularly read books to my mother. This act
has developed my reading skills. In middle school, my mother and I read through
a book “together” (I read faster than her, so I ended up getting far ahead of
her). Although I don’t completely remember the assignments that occurred, I
remember discussing A Prayer for Owen Meany with my mother. My mother and
I would talk in depth about the events and the meaning of the events in the
book which was the most complex and in depth conversation that has impacted my
way of looking at meaning in a text rather than paying attention to superficial
analysis.
B)
Making Sunday School Curriculum
1)
I’ve taught Sunday school since I was in sixth
grade, but it hasn’t been until the past couple years that I’ve begun writing
my own curriculum. Making this curriculum involved reading parts of the bible
in a more critical and thoughtful manner than I had ever read a book before. I
was writing Sunday school curriculum for children twelve years old and younger.
I had to read bible stories with the idea of explaining the meaning of the stories
to a four-year-old. I began learning to read to find only the most important of
details that apply towards a specific idea or lesson.
C)
Bible Quizzing
1)
I did bible trivia through a specific church
conference. The conference would pick a book of the bible, sometimes more if
they were short, and ask various questions about the piece. Rather than
creating understanding of a piece of literature, this emphasized learning memorization
and retention of what was read. I had to remember what I had read which has
helped my reading retention as a whole.
Tuesday, March 3, 2020
Literature and Reading Handout
The Best Lesson Series: Literature
15 Master Teachers Share What Works
Outline:
Each lesson
is split into 6 sections
·
An Introduction
·
Learning Goals stating:
o Broad
Implications
o Knowledge
Gained
o Skills
Acquired
o Evidence of
Learning
·
Learning Plan
·
Handouts/Resources
o I have an
ebook version of the book that contains links to handouts and resources for the
lesson, including poems, short stories, and pictures.
·
What Made It Memorable
·
Short Bio on Teacher
1.
Finding Courage to Fly Close to the
Sun: Interpreting Icarus – Ruth Arseneault
a.
“I once had a theatre mentor tell me that she saw
her job, not as building actors, but as building audiences. That is how I see
my English classes. So few of them will go on to become English majors, but by
heavens, I want them to continue to experience the joys of deep reading,
regardless of what text they encounter. I also want them to have the ability to
move through the world experiencing the joys of art and culture, but always
with a critical eye.”
2.
The American Dream – Susan Barber
a.
“I want students to understand the idea of the
American Dream and have a sense of how varied the dream is among different
people throughout different time periods. Students will also comprehend how the
arts, not just literature, reflect current events and be able to identify
common themes and ideas reflected in the arts.”
3.
Thinking Icons for Literary Analysis
– Laura Bradley
a.
“Students will learn a variety of ways to read,
think about, and write analytically in response to literature. They will choose
significant excerpts from text and choose lenses through which to write
analytical responses to them.”
4.
Teaching Symbolism and
Characterization in Of Mice and Men – Brianna Crowley
a.
“I
want students to analyze visual and written texts to understand
characterization and symbolism more deeply. This lesson fosters an
understanding of different points of view. It teaches them that literary
characters are multi-faceted and complex, reflecting true human nature and
motivation.
5.
Ignite Talks – Gerard Dawson
a.
“We
grow when we are pushed to the edges of our capabilities. When students
perform, hit ‘publish’ and put themselves out there in their own way, real
learning happens.”
6.
Multi-Draft Reading Using Print and
Visual Texts – Todd Finley
a.
“My
main goal is to help students realize that deeper analytical reading of print
and visual texts can be achieved through re-reading. I also want students to
see how inquiry can be aided when both a ‘paradigmatic’ and ‘narrative’ lens
are used. More important than the literature and visual texts chosen are the
analytical skills that can be transferred to subsequent texts.”
7.
Student-Generated Questions Using
Science Fiction – Joy Kirr
a.
“Students’
questions often go unasked and unanswered. We need to give them space to ask
their own questions and find the answers together. This can be a catalyst to
get students asking the questions and learning from each other for life.”
8.
Demystifying Poetry: 3-Step Poetry
Analysis and “The Red Wheelbarrow” – Jori Krulder
a.
“I
want students to develop independence in analyzing poetry, moving beyond the
misconception that a poem is a puzzle with one correct answer to the
understanding that through thoughtful application of their perceptions and
prior knowledge to various aspects of the text, they can create meaning
competently on their own.”
9.
Building Bridges with Visual Literacy
– Shanna Peeples
a.
“Both
the film and the short story require students to practice critical thinking and
questioning skills because the pieces are sufficiently complex in terms of
character, theme, and necessity to infer.”
10. What Makes a Work of Literature? – Amy Rasmussen
a.
“Through
the lens of language, students will begin their inquiry into what makes a work
of literature. They will read two pieces of literary criticism and discuss the
writers’ assertions as the genesis of developing their own response to the
question: What makes a work of literature?”
11. Literary 3x3: Literary Analysis Remixed & Reshuffled – Dan Ryder
a.
“They should find themselves equipped with a
powerful analytical tool and dynamic synthesis process that will evolve
throughout the school year. They will be able to distill a text down to its
most essential concepts and themes, identify the benefits and challenges of
collaborative analysis, and recognize trends across a collection of analyses.”
12. April Awesomeness Poetry Challenge – Joshua Stock
a.
“I want them to determine the effectiveness of a
poem in relation to other poems and support their position with evidence from
the text. They will use the views of their classmates to strengthen their
position and actively participate in moving the dialogue forward.”
13. When Novels Start with Bathroom Scenes – Dave Stuart, Jr.
a.
“I first want students to realize how much we often
miss on a first reading and then to see how delightfully confusing subsequent
close readings of a passage can be. Students will analyze how one scene
contributes to the book as a whole.”
14. Think Like a Poet – Brian Sztabnik
a.
“Perhaps the reason many students are turned off by
poetry is because we make them read it rather than experience it. This lesson
puts students in the mind of a poet. Without even realizing it, they will be
analyzing the clues to determine its subject, imagery, point of view, and
meaning. It is time they had a new experience with poetry, one where they think
like a poet.”
15. The Excitement Graph – Heather Wolpert-Gawron
a.
“I want students to walk away with a sense of what
jazzes them about a particular story or book and then recognize that narratives
generally have patterns of writing that lead them to feel that way at certain
points of the storytelling. They will analyze the plot structure in a narrative
by literally plotting symbols on a graph to indicate their level of excitement
during different parts of the tale. The resulting line that can be drawn
between these symbols should indicate the ‘story swoop’ of the narrative.”
Why this Book:
·
The title drew me in
o
It makes a broad claim that makes me want to examine
Teaching Ideas and Implementations:
·
The book gives 15 detailed lessons
o
Lessons can be adapted for different texts
·
Most lessons push multiple forms of media and visuals
as literature: images, movies, tv shows, and songs
·
Details ways of annotating texts and how to teach
students how to annotate a text
Challenges:
·
Some writes provide a lot of detail and structure on
their lessons
o Can make
lessons seem rigid and inflexible
o Can make
lessons overwhelming
·
Some lessons are vague and made to be modified for
different situations
o Can make
lessons overwhelming
o The teacher
has to do more work to prepare the lesson
o Teacher is
left not knowing what to do
·
The lessons are individualized as they are designed
by the specific teachers for their grade-level and teaching style
Cool Information:
Many lessons are made to be changed and adapted to most any teacher,
grade-level, and student need.
·
What changes do the authors mention?
·
What changes can you think of?
Example Lesson to Think About
Thinking Icons for
Literary Analysis
Analyze and annotate a familiar
story such as a fairytale, the author uses “Goldilocks”, before moving on to a
more complex text.
You do not need to use the authors
texts. What other texts would work? Could you use another medium than a piece
of literature?
What about the Thinking Icon themselves? How could they be modified to better support a lesson?
Wednesday, February 26, 2020
Blog Post #7--CCSS for Reading Literature and CCSS for Reading Informational Texts and NES text pages 1-87
When it comes to the CCSS, I am
quite surprised that there are only a few specific texts that are required or
recommended to teach. Nothing dictates that ninth graders must read Romeo and
Juliet. There is no requirement to teach Shakespeare in general. The literature
itself serves as a medium to teach analysis, critical thinking, and organizing thoughts
into a logical order. Informational texts create a more specific goal as students
need to be able to evaluate claims and arguments of texts while certain informational
texts are highlighted: the American Constitution, the Declaration of
Independence, the Gettysburg Address, and more. There is an emphasis on the
ability to recognize the importance of historical texts that created/formed the
USA.
The standards across all grades are
relatively similar. The type of analysis, critical thinking, and organization
becomes more complex as students proceed through secondary, but students are
only building on knowledge they have gathered from previous school years. Only
a few points have dramatic change while still keeping a general theme for the type
of analysis and goals for the students.
The NES emphasizes studying these
ideas and knowing how to make sense of pieces of text but there is a deficient perspective
of analyzing pieces for themes and arguments. Teachers are trained to recognize
meaning for pieces but are rarely taught historical texts that are required
according to the CCSS. Teachers are taught literature from a wider variety of
time periods, genres, and localities.
Wednesday, February 12, 2020
Writing and Language Presentation Handout
The Writing Revolution: A Guide to
Advancing Thinking Through Writing in All Subjects and Grades
By Judith C. Hochman and Natalie
Wexler
Why this Book:
This
book gives detailed examples and activities that a teacher can do in any
classroom that are proven to help improve students’ writing abilities which
will then improve other skills such as: viewing, speaking, listening, reading,
and thinking.
Outline:
I)
Chapter 1: Sentences
1)
Use sentence activities to teach grammar and
conventions.
2)
When introducing a new activity, begin by
modeling it and having students practice it orally.
3)
Have students practice activities with sentence
fragments, scrambled sentences, and run-on sentences to grasp the concept of a
complete sentence.
4)
Familiarize students with the four sentence
types – statement, command, question, and exclamation – to equip them to vary
their sentence structure and create effective topic and concluding sentences.
5)
Have students develop questions about texts or
pictures to spur them to read closely and deepen their content knowledge.
6)
Give students sentence-stem activities with but,
because, and so to enable them to think critically and to use and
understand more complex sentences in their writing and reading.
7)
Have students practice beginning sentences with
subordinating conjunctions (although, since, etc.) to familiarize
them with the syntax used in written language, help them extend their
responses, enhancing their reading comprehension, and provide a way to create
interesting topic sentences.
8)
Introduce students to appositives to help them
create effective topic sentences and give a reader more information.
9)
Have students practice sentence combining to
teach grammar and help them create longer sentences using varied structures.
10)
Embed sentence activities in the content you’re
teaching as much as possible to check students’ comprehension and deepen their
understanding.
II)
Chapter 2: Sentence Expansion and Note-Taking
1)
List question words on a wall chart in this
order: who, what, when, where, why, and how.
2)
Provide kernel sentences that express complete
thoughts but are not commands or questions.
3)
Have students start expanding sentences using
the question words when, where, and why.
4)
Teach students how to reduce text to key words
and phrases, abbreviations, and symbols to help them process what they have
read and take notes more efficiently.
5)
Have students write answers to question words in
the form of notes on dotted lines only, and write their expanded sentences on
solid lines only.
6)
Have students begin their expanded sentences
with the answer to when if it is one of the question words provided.
7)
Make sure that students’ expanded sentences
contain all the information in the responses they’ve noted on the dotted lines.
8)
Use sentence expansion activities to help
students anticipate what readers need to know.
9)
Use sentence expansion activities to check students’
comprehension of content
III)
Chapter 3: One Step at a Time
1)
Writing places heavy demands on the aspects of
cognition known as executive functions and working memory.
2)
Break the writing process down into a series of
four steps – planning and outlining, drafting, revising, and editing.
3)
Spend the most instructional time on planning
and outlining and revising.
4)
Students don’t need to take every piece of
writing through all four steps, but they shouldn’t stop after the drafting step
– they should always revise and edit.
5)
Before students can plan a piece of writing,
they need to identify the topic, the audience, and the purpose
6)
Introduce students to the meaning of expository
term such as enumerate and justify to help them understand the
purpose of an assignment or a prompt.
IV)
Chapter 4: First Steps in Planning
1)
An outlining format should be linear and simple,
enabling students to rank material in order of importance, eliminate irrelevant
information, and put points in a logical order.
2)
To help students understand the concept of a
topic sentence, have them distinguish topic sentences from supporting details,
generate detail sentences, match details with the appropriate topic sentence,
and eliminate the least relevant detail sentences.
3)
Build on students’ knowledge of sentences to
introduce the three strategies for constructing topic and concluding sentences:
sentence types, appositives, and subordinating conjunctions
4)
Have students practice writing topic sentences
from notes you provide.
5)
Guide students through the process of creating
non-repetitive concluding sentences.
6)
Have students convert a paragraph you provide
into an SPO to help them grasp the structure of a paragraph.
7)
Model the process of creating an SPO as a
whole-class activity: brainstorming or relating details and crafting a topic
sentence, putting details in categories or a logical sequence, writing them as
notes on the dotted lines of the SPO, and generating a concluding sentence.
8)
Have students create their own SPOs and covert
them in draft paragraphs.
V)
Chapter 5: Putting Flesh on the Bones
1)
Revising, or making structural improvements to a
draft, should be done before editing, which consists of correcting mechanical
errors.
2)
Before you have students try to revise their own
writing, have them practice on bare-bones unelaborate paragraphs that you
provide.
3)
To create a draft of a paragraph, have students
transfer their topic and concluding sentences from the SPOs onto a sheet of
paper and convert the notes for their detail sentences into complete sentences.
4)
To help students revise their drafts, remind
them to use sentence expansion, sentence types, and subordinating conjunctions
to vary their sentence structure.
5)
Encourage students to use vivid and precise
words in the revision process.
6)
Have students practice using the various types
of transition words to signal the connections between their ideas and create
smoothly flowing prose.
7)
Help students incorporate quotations by having
them select the text to be quoted carefully, reduce it to note form to ensure
they understand it, and frame it with an appropriate introduction and
explanation.
8)
Make sure your students are familiar with
proofreading symbols so that you can give them feedback briefly and
efficiently.
VI)
Chapter 6: Summarizing
1)
Summarizing builds on skills students have
developed in sentence-expansion activities and in creating SPOs
2)
Before asking students to summarize, make sure
they have sufficient knowledge of the topic to understand the text you’re
asking them to summarize and that they understand the intended audience,
purpose, and format.
3)
Once students are familiar with sentence
expansion, you can have them summarize a text in a summary sentence.
4)
Students who have been introduced to the SPO can
use it to summarize a specific text.
5)
Level 2 students can create summaries using the
Combined Outline, which uses the summary sentence on the top half of the
template as its topic sentence and requires students to provide additional
information for the detail lines.
VII) Chapter
7: Moving on to Compositions
1)
Before trying to create MPOs, students need
ample experience developing topic sentences, writing supporting details in note
form, and constructing coherent paragraphs.
2)
Level 1 students can use these skills to create
simple three- or four-paragraph MPOs for book reports and biographies.
3)
Students who are ready for multiple-paragraph
writing but still need more support can use the Transition Outline, which has
them write topic sentences for each paragraph.
4)
Introduce students in Levels 1 and 2 to MPOs by
modeling the process of creating one.
5)
Assign topics to students who are still learning
to create MPOs and provide guidance in selecting a topic for more experienced
students
6)
If students’ MPOs require independent research,
have them commit to a schedule with deadlines for each step of the process.
7)
Provide students with models of thesis
statements that fit the type of MPO they’re constructing, and have them include
a plan of development that maps out the structure of the composition
8)
Have students fill in the Main Idea and
corresponding Detail boxes for each paragraph of the MPO in note form.
9)
To prepare students to write introductory
paragraphs, introduce them to the GST formula – incorporating general,
specific, and thesis statements – and have them practice distinguishing among
and creating the three types of statements.
10)
Have students reverse the formula to TSG for the
conclusion.
11)
Have students convert their completed MPOs to
draft, revise them by varying sentence structure, and use transitions to link
paragraphs and sentences.
VIII)
Chapter 8: Take a Stand
1)
Understand the difference between fact and
opinion.
2)
Present a claim using emphasis, illustration,
and conclusion transitions to underscore an important point, provide an
example, or indicate they’re coming to the end of their argument.
3)
Use conjunctions such a but,
subordinating conjunctions such as although, and change-of-direction transitions
such as however, to signal that they’re introducing a different point of
view.
4)
Use nouns and verbs that are well suited to
argumentative writing.
5)
Integrate quotations with appropriate
introductions and explanations.
6)
Determine which piece of evidence is the
strongest and therefore should be mentioned last.
7)
Use the SPO to plan two paragraphs presenting
opposing points of view and evidence to support them.
8)
Use the MPO to plan pro-con essays that present
two points of view and supporting evidence in a neutral manner.
9)
Use the MPO to plan four- and five-paragraph
argumentative essays that take a position backed by evidence.
IX)
Chapter 9: A Gauge and a Guide
1)
When assessing student writing, be aware of the
factors that can interfere with an accurate picture – such as a student’s
difficult decoding or understanding the text used as a prompt and the frequency
of mechanical errors.
2)
Administer brief independent writing assessments
in response to a prompt or a text three times a year to measure students’ independent
writing ability.
3)
Assess students’ ability to develop outlines and
to revise their work.
4)
Use the Single Paragraph Checklist, Independent
Writing Rubric, or Independent Writing Tracker to record individual students’
progress and that of the class as a whole.
5)
Administer diagnostic assessments two or three
times a year to gauge whether students have mastered the specific strategies
you’ve recently taught them.
6)
Use data from assessments to help set your
objectives for the class as a whole and differentiate instruction to meet
students’ individual needs.
7)
Maintain a folder or portfolio of each student’s
work to track progress made over the year.
X)
Chapter 10: Putting the Revolution into Practice
1)
To decide how long to spend of a particular TWR
strategy or set of activities, you’ll need to use your own judgment about your
particular students’ needs and abilities.
2)
By weaving TWR strategies into regular
instruction and embedding them in curricular content, you’ll be able to use
writing instruction as a powerful teaching tool.
3)
Continue using TWR strategies that you have
already taught, alongside new ones that you are introducing.
4)
All students, regardless of grade or ability
level, should begin with TWR sentence-level activities and practice all of the
scaffolding steps that lead to creating outlines.
5)
Expect students to revise their own work and
unelaborated paragraphs regularly. Give feedback that draws on the sentence
strategies students have learned.
6)
Use several strategies concurrently while
teaching a single book or topic.
7)
Differentiate TWR activities for students who
are struggling or are racing ahead, without altering the basic form of the
activity or using different content.
8)
Use TWR’s pacing guides, in combination with
beginning-of-the-year assessments, to determine goals for the year.
9)
Note that the pacing guide for each grade
incorporates all TWR activities described as having been introduced in previous
grades.
Challenges:
Although full of
examples and ways of assessing students’ abilities, the book repeatedly
emphasizes that teachers are the only one who can judge what students need to
work on and must learn when to use the different activities.
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